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What Our Clients Are Saying...

          "Dear James and Elizabeth:
 
          2006 was a very good year for ZERO HANDICAP:
 
* First Place Winner *
Hollywood Screenwriting Institute Contest
 
* Top-Three Winner *
Nevada Film Office Screenwriters Competition
 
* Top-Five Finalist * 
Vancouver FTX West Expo
Jeff Kitchen Screenwriters' Competition
 
* Top-Sixteen Finalist * 
Cinestory Screenwriting Awards,
including a coveted invitation to 
Cinestory's 3-day mentoring retreat
with top industry executives in April, 2007.
 
* Finalist * 
Scr(i)pt Magazine/AFI Open Door Contest
 
          We're optimistic that 2007 will be an even greater
          year. Thank you for your input and help in making
          our script better. Feel free to brag about it on your
          website.
 
          Clint Braly & Jim Braly"
 

Dear James & Elizabeth,

    I am so excited about your report on "Islands in the Stream" right now I can barely write this, but I have to. After letting your envelope sit around all afternoon because I was so afraid of what it would say, I read it and I can't THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, enough.

    Please believe me, I agree so much with EVERY SINGLE THING you suggested. I was at my wit's end trying to figure out what was wrong and you two seem to nail it exactly. Also, I had a feeling about the scene length etc., but I wasn't sure.
 
    Your last two suggestions are perfect. The ending was bothering me so much, I knew I still didn't have it right and I just couldn't for the life of me figure out why.

    Please believe me, I will recommend you two to everyone I know and if something good eventually happens with my script, I will definitely promote you in any way I can. I don't think there's a better compliment that I can possibly give you as script readers, than you are the absolute best because you are such open-minded readers.

    I think you have absolutely saved my script and I will definitely not forget you. Thank you again so much.

Janet Hogate